Wednesday, May 04, 2011

welly welly well well

Stricken by a catalystic lack of fortitude...
Unencumbered by severely acclimatized focus...
Bourgeouning a comprehensive carelessness...
Surrendering to a lackadaisical effort ethic...

Falling Down...

5 comments:

Joseph Gregory said...

Well my friend you have aquired a fan of your writing, though I don't suppose you give a damm. I look for the music of words when I read poetry and your words sing.
Great job.
I come to your blog with a purpose.
To build a following in order to screen my book. I plan to blog my book chapter by chapter.Would you consider helping me as a crtitc/editor. Thank you for your consideration.

Phil Plasma said...

JoGreg: You evoke a judgmental tinge to presuppose how I would feel about a new reader.
Thanks for the compliment concerning my writing.
I have visited and will continue to visit your blog.

Joseph Gregory said...

pardon the judgement. it's the wise ass kid from Brooklyn in me, though I think I get that when I feel like I know a person even if I don't. Again, pardon, was hoping to get a laugh or at least a smile out of you.
I do welcome the corrections, though I'm a little embarrased in regards to my grammmar. I hope you don't mind if I don't post them. I have already made the corrections and I truly thank you for your support.

Debstar said...

Great movie.

Zhoen said...

Phil,
I come to your blog without a single purpose or thought in my mind.

But, you knew that.